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All Deviations
All Deviations


Time
Time is aloof
aloft
a loft
I sleep in one
in darkness I lie
My heart is dark
my heart was broken
my heart has loved

a moment of lust

a lifetime of regret
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I was forced to write poetry in class, so this spawned from that session, as did one other.
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*FlamesX666:iconFlamesX666: May 3, 2007, 5:59:20 PM
... =| Your heart isn't dark.

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If I lay here.. if I just lay here, would you lie with me and just forget the world? Forget what we're told. Before we get too old. Just show me a garden that's bursting into life. Let's waste time chasing cars around our heads.
~theravinggamer:icontheravinggamer: May 4, 2007, 7:52:52 AM
I'm aware my heart isn't dark. Maybe a touch evil, but not exactly dark. (I also don't sleep in a loft. I sleep in a basement.)

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If knowing is half the battle, math is power, and ignorance is bliss, does that mean I know half of the power of bliss?
*FlamesX666:iconFlamesX666: May 4, 2007, 12:08:30 PM
... I sleep in the attic...

Your heart, is mine. Period.

:P Deal with it.

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If I lay here.. if I just lay here, would you lie with me and just forget the world? Forget what we're told. Before we get too old. Just show me a garden that's bursting into life. Let's waste time chasing cars around our heads.
=XxTrinityxX:iconXxTrinityxX: May 6, 2007, 10:35:29 PM
:D Like it

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Yeah the clicking noise? With the sparks and smoke?
Mhmm...That's bad. I'd suggest you go before it bursts into flames. - me on the washer in the Kunming Gaun Hau School
~theravinggamer:icontheravinggamer: May 7, 2007, 8:02:41 AM
;P You don't get the fact that this is all just to show off, do you?

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If knowing is half the battle, math is power, and ignorance is bliss, does that mean I know half of the power of bliss?
*FlamesX666:iconFlamesX666: May 7, 2007, 11:58:13 AM
Apparently not.

:o

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If I lay here.. if I just lay here, would you lie with me and just forget the world? Forget what we're told. Before we get too old. Just show me a garden that's bursting into life. Let's waste time chasing cars around our heads.
~pinkberrie:iconpinkberrie: May 10, 2007, 11:04:02 PM
STOP WITH THE EMONESSSS!

...so sorry, emo is a genre of music, that some stupid assholes have been calling a group of people cuz they listen to emo music. its like punk....

Random Message number 3:

ZERO AND ONE IN…

“An Amusing Tangent”

Narrator: One Day in Number Ville…

ZERO: IMGONNAJUMP!!!

Radom lady: Ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!

Police officer one: car 123 to station, it looks like we have a problem… a math problem.

Gay police officer: OMG! What do we do? What do we do?

Police officer: you know the drill… send in Number One

*On the roof top*

One: alright kid, what’s the trouble?

Zero: You dunno what’s it’s like to be me. I’m nobody, I’m nothing. When ever I try to add myself to a group, they just leave me behind (0 + 273 = 273). And whenever I try to get close to someone, I find they disappear (0 x 9 = 0)! I have zero friends, zero dollars in my bank account, and zero reasons to live.

One: whoeee boy, I’ve seen some negative numbers in my day but you take to cake.

Zero: I’m hardly even a number! I’m a ‘place holder’. Try putting that on your resume! “Hi I’m Zero, I’m a place holder.” I don’t even know what I’m for!

Four: I’m FOUR!

Zero: I might as well just not even exist.

One: well uh, technically you don’t…

Zero: See what I mean! Well, I’m through with not existing! IMGONNAKILLMYSELF!

One: No hold up there kid. First of all, you’re not nobody; you’re just the abstinent of somebody! And that is nothing to be ashamed of. Heh, you think you have it bad? Some numbers are negative, some numbers are irrational and some numbers are just plain odd. But you, you mean something. Just ask anyone!

*random people below*

Radom Jewish guy: Zero is the whole in my doughnut!

Hot tennis chick: In tennis, we call zero, love.

Math nerdish guy: If it wasn’t for Zero, the X and Y axis would have never met!

*back on the roof top*

One: really, if it wasn’t for Zero, there would be no dismal point. *gasp*

Zero: Y-you mean…?

One: yes. Without you Zero life would be point less.

Zero: well, what do you know, huh? Mr. popular, your number one and everyone loves you. You could never understand my pain!

One: b-but don’t you see, one is the most lonely number!

Zero: *cries* Oh I love you number One!

One: *cries* I love you zero!

*Climax hug*

*POOF! One disappears*

Zero: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! *Jumps off building*

Narrator: THE END!

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I, Pinkberrie, do solemnly swear to comment all the art I click on, and favorite the ones I enjoy, regardless of the number of reviews, its age, or anything else.
~And don't forget: Elvendork! It's unisex!
~theravinggamer:icontheravinggamer: May 17, 2007, 8:09:05 AM
;p You is funny.

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If knowing is half the battle, math is power, and ignorance is bliss, does that mean I know half of the power of bliss?
*FlamesX666:iconFlamesX666: May 17, 2007, 1:59:04 PM
:] I is yours.

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If I lay here.. if I just lay here, would you lie with me and just forget the world? Forget what we're told. Before we get too old. Just show me a garden that's bursting into life. Let's waste time chasing cars around our heads.
~theravinggamer:icontheravinggamer: May 17, 2007, 6:48:08 PM
You is mine. :) And vice versa.

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If knowing is half the battle, math is power, and ignorance is bliss, does that mean I know half of the power of bliss?