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All Deviations
All Deviations


Allies,
demise,
dead and done.
My greatest enemy is the sun.
I'm not very dark, but I am quite bright.
I just don't very much like the sun's light.
I'm a creature of shadows, of darkness, of shade,
although ill will to many people this bades.
I'm a decent kid with a passionate heart.
Now if only I could find a girl with whom I can start
a good relationship, build on friendship and trust
(personally, a romantic soul is a must),
but that is unlikely, at least at this time,
which is why I have to settle with rhyme.
I want a girl who loves, who smiles and cares,
and doesn't mind people and their unbelieving stares
of envy and jealousy that I've found someone,
which will weigh on the other girls' hearts like a ton
of weight, maybe lead, and crush them, you see.
All anyone's done in the past is try to hurt me.
I've developed a lot, especially in mind,
and I have become wise, gentle and kind.
I have a message to tell, one that I'd like to send,
and the message is this: love the journey, not the end.
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I just sat there and wrote for ten minutes. It's amazing what goes through your head when you don't care, isn't it?
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*FlamesX666:iconFlamesX666: May 3, 2007, 6:03:25 PM
... This poem makes me sad. Really, really sad.

You have someone who loves you and you love in return. You have someone who gave her heart and everything else to you. You have someone who will never leave you, for anything. Who doesn't get jealous over the simple things. You have someone who's devoted to you, and only you.

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If I lay here.. if I just lay here, would you lie with me and just forget the world? Forget what we're told. Before we get too old. Just show me a garden that's bursting into life. Let's waste time chasing cars around our heads.
~theravinggamer:icontheravinggamer: May 4, 2007, 7:51:12 AM
I'm well aware. :) You. And I'm never gonna lose you, am I? :cuddle:

Don't be sad. Be purple! ;p

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If knowing is half the battle, math is power, and ignorance is bliss, does that mean I know half of the power of bliss?
*FlamesX666:iconFlamesX666: May 4, 2007, 12:06:30 PM
Nope, you're stuck with me.
I promised you, I'd never leave you. And you know I always keep what I promise.

:hug:

:smooch:

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If I lay here.. if I just lay here, would you lie with me and just forget the world? Forget what we're told. Before we get too old. Just show me a garden that's bursting into life. Let's waste time chasing cars around our heads.
=XxTrinityxX:iconXxTrinityxX: May 6, 2007, 10:34:41 PM
Lovely poem dear :hug:

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Yeah the clicking noise? With the sparks and smoke?
Mhmm...That's bad. I'd suggest you go before it bursts into flames. - me on the washer in the Kunming Gaun Hau School
~theravinggamer:icontheravinggamer: May 7, 2007, 7:58:39 AM
:) I know.

:glomp: As are you. :cuddle:

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If knowing is half the battle, math is power, and ignorance is bliss, does that mean I know half of the power of bliss?
~theravinggamer:icontheravinggamer: May 7, 2007, 8:23:17 AM
:hug: Thanks. ^_^

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If knowing is half the battle, math is power, and ignorance is bliss, does that mean I know half of the power of bliss?
=XxTrinityxX:iconXxTrinityxX: May 7, 2007, 8:38:09 AM
^^

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Yeah the clicking noise? With the sparks and smoke?
Mhmm...That's bad. I'd suggest you go before it bursts into flames. - me on the washer in the Kunming Gaun Hau School
*FlamesX666:iconFlamesX666: May 7, 2007, 11:56:26 AM
:cuddle:

:glomp:

:smooch:

:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

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If I lay here.. if I just lay here, would you lie with me and just forget the world? Forget what we're told. Before we get too old. Just show me a garden that's bursting into life. Let's waste time chasing cars around our heads.
~theravinggamer:icontheravinggamer: May 17, 2007, 8:09:47 AM
:cuddle:

(Why go overboard on emotes? ;))

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If knowing is half the battle, math is power, and ignorance is bliss, does that mean I know half of the power of bliss?